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The winter is here again with harsh winds blowing! All caretakers with shovels as if on a mission, A transperent white sheath blocking my vision! The snow on the sloping roofs... it looks pretty and neat, The constant struggle I go though to keep myself on my feet! Funky caps, colourful gloves and the warmth of mittons, The classy trench coats with those huge buttons! The stylish scarves in a perfect knot, Those flasks with coffee simmering hot! What cosy attire from head to toes, Flushed pink faces with cherry red nose! The beauty of white that spreads all over the place, All my fatigue seems to vanish without a trace! For me, Minneapolis may have come to represent more than my fair share of hurt, sorrows and misery but one thing I have to say, its has also iven me one of my most favourite expereinces of a lifetime! I just love those snowflakes that stay on my nose and eyelashes!! :):) |
| Ajay November 29, 2005 11:24 AM PST hmmm.... :) | ||
| Sushrut November 29, 2005 12:37 PM PST Go get a PEA coat soon :) | ||
| Neeti November 29, 2005 01:02 PM PST Classy!!!:):):) | ||
| Aditya November 30, 2005 02:48 AM PST :D That was awesome. | ||
| Prak November 30, 2005 04:19 PM PST Looks like you have been waiting to post this poem.... Good one.. | ||
| Mukta December 1, 2005 03:16 AM PST There are somethings that become a part, Of the experiences you hold close to heart, With this poem of yours I now know, That one of them is snow. | ||
| Fly me home December 2, 2005 09:50 PM PST i presume there are other unwritten things too.. | ||
| Prashanth December 3, 2005 12:43 AM PST er... it started snowing 2 weeks ago here in State College. initially its fun but wait till your nose and ears freeze while you are waiting for the bus! having lived in Chennai all my life... you can guess... | ||
| Prashanth December 3, 2005 11:26 PM PST Actually, a blog pal of mine (Kirthi) had written a post on snow just a couple of days ago and Ramani "contributed" the link to this post there :) I was Ramani's classmate in last two years of school... I was also in IITM but a diff branch. I'll be quite glad to teach anyone bridge... but slight problem: you're a few hundred miles away!! ... and I forgot to write in the last comment: nice poem! | ||
| Prashanth December 3, 2005 11:31 PM PST P.S. I re-read my comment on Ramani's blog to you and realized that it had come out nasty, which is not at all what I intended :) apologies!! | ||
| intern December 4, 2005 06:02 AM PST nice poem I absolutely loved snow the first year I came here, I mean to the US ... 2001 Now I like it only when I'm indoors.. | ||
| Chaitanya December 10, 2005 10:30 PM PST laieee bhariiiiii!!!!!! :)) | ||
| Name December 19, 2005 05:34 PM PST aicha, kahi kay...... | ||
| Madhura Sane December 23, 2005 04:36 PM PST Hey!!! thats nice write back madhura262@gmail.com | ||
| Ajay January 28, 2006 02:58 AM PST updates please...there has to be something you want to write about !!! | ||
| madhur February 5, 2006 02:31 AM PST hi! call it coincidence? just happened to see this one. guess you wont be able to place me? we met at Ketki's wedding. i'm madhur(was at NDA then!) well, i'm at the Indian Military Academy, Dehradun now. wasup at ur end? for the poem, you sure seem to have a good poetic sense! | ||
| madhur February 5, 2006 02:34 AM PST my mail id madhur_vidwans@yahoo.co.in | ||
| Harshal February 13, 2006 12:33 AM PST anand zala tumhi lok marathi pustak vaachta he pahun. Mazi website nakki visit kara. http://myharshal.com | ||
| AM March 5, 2006 10:43 AM PST update..update...update.. | ||
| Mukta March 7, 2006 01:22 PM PST You know the problem with excellent blogs...they scare away the ones which are on the way...maybe cause they seem trivial before the one that was...but trivial ones are necessary for the good ones to shine through... | ||
| Mukta March 7, 2006 01:22 PM PST You know the problem with excellent blogs...they scare away the ones which are on the way...maybe cause they seem trivial before the one that was...but trivial ones are necessary for the good ones to shine through... | ||
| Ajay March 20, 2006 09:45 PM PST How about an update? There's still snow around, and I'm guessing there are unpublished posts as well ! | ||
| Name March 24, 2006 05:44 AM PST post deleted!? | ||
| A creative bout April 9, 2008 08:45 AM PDT Hi, Finally it's nice to see someone who still loves Snow as dearly as me. Undoubtedly, i have the poorest of poetic sense, but still... It surprises me when people here are irritating each other's ears off when it starts snowing. personally I enjoy every moment of those falling flakes, carelessly getting carried around by most delicate breezes, taking an eternity to finally land before they linger around like a 16 yr old. Even when there are piles of those flakes, it brings back memories of "khovalela NaraL" everytime I take them in my palms. wish they could taste as fresh n sweet as NaraL!! I have tried to take so many pictures of this beautiful season, but obviously enough never could get myself in those. (no one wants to get out in snow, u c?...) I am so used to the endless rattle on ceiling when it rains in India, the conspicuous lack of sound and ubiquitous silence of this country even when it snows makes it even more lovable I guess. Thanx for sharing this wonderful feeling.... | ||
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